Dr. J

Dr. J


                                                            by David Cha
 Am 9
   "Ring, Ring" the phone rang. I got the phone. "Hello? This is detective Gamine.  How can I help you?" I asked. "Gamine the target will go to you at 8pm. Remember Paris," the strange-voiced man was speaking. "What? What are you talking about? Who are you and what the heck are you speaking now?" I asked. "Don't make me feel disappointed, Gamine," and the strange-voiced man cut off the phone. What the strange call. Even though it is strange, I just forgot it and went to my work.
 Am 11
 " Ring, Ring," again the phone rang. I mumbled. It can be a person last time. I'll just take the phone. I got the phone. "Hello? This is detective Gamine. How can I help you?" I asked, hoping that this is not that man again. Violent gods. It was not the strange-voiced man but it was a strange-voiced woman. She said, "Gamine you have to come to Paris until 8!" I said to her, "What the heck are you talking about? And why should I have to!?" I yelled. Then she did not talk......The phone was on but she was gone. Maybe she was kidnapped. I should know where she is. But where in Paris? It can be the back street of my office, or the museum, or maybe my friends house. How can I find her? I went to my computer lab and searched '8pm in Paris'. There were no links to a website, a blog, or news...........Wait! There is a blog post who is a fan of Big Bang! Big Bang is doing a secret concert in front of Eiffel Tower! I watched my clock. It is almost 11:30. I'm living far from Eiffel tower so I should probably leave at like 4 or 5.

<THE STRANGER>

 7 pm

I arrived at the Eiffel tower now because of the really bad traffic.
I brought a camera, a pen, and a note. First I look around the Eiffel Tower for a stranger. But nope, not at all. One more time. Nope not at all. I'll check one more time. Nope not at all.










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Yes~! There is a stranger. There is one guy who was looking continuously around carrying a traveling bag. I spied on him. I ran around him. But at the alley of the apartment he disappeared. What? Man! Where is he?! I really hate hiding. I can't give up but there is no time left. I turned back and went to the Eiffel Tower. I turned around and suddenly, 

CRASH!!!!

 I got a crash with a person who seemed like a guide.

"Woh, be careful man." I said.

I tried to see his face but he was still facing his face down.

"Hey are you okay?" I asked.

Then no answer. He pushed me and ran for his life.

However I saw his face.

He was the guide, the stranger.

<MORE STRANGERS>

PM 7:20

Because of the stranger 1<a guide> I spent my 20 minutes of 1 hour.While I was finding him close to the Eiffel Tower, two man was fighting with words.I got close to them and listened to them.They said,

Man1 "Hey you stupid man, listen to me!"

Man 2 "Listen to you? Such a ridiculous thing that I have ever heard!Exploding it?! Do you think that's possible?"

Man 1"Of course! Think about it! People willbe afraid of our team-Team HACK and we will be the issue of the world!"

Team HACK? What is team HACK?Team HACK? Hmm...

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Wait Team HACK? Team HACK? Soldier of Dr.J?Than its Dr. J?!!! Man, it wasn't just a kidnapped case!

IT'S A TERROR!!

<THE TERROR OF THE EIFFEL TOWER>

I was embarrassed. The terror of the Eiffel Tower! Wow.  Are you asking who is Dr. J? Dr.J is a terrorists who didn't failed in any terror. Because of him many good arts pieces were been destroyed-such as pyramid, Schloss Neuschwanstein(really amazingly beautiful architecture) and other 12 architectures or other things. The bad thing is that the police don't know why he is doing such terrors and how he did it. And one more bad thing.There are soldiers of Dr.J, Team HACK. Maybe the people who I saw can be the members of Team HACK. It means that I'm challenged by Dr. J!!!!!!!!!

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH

I should not get on the phone. Man, it a challenge from the Dr. J... I want to cry now.Why?If the person who lose challenge from the Dr.J,

DIES

Maybe I will be murdered, but I have to stop this TERROR. They have bombs near or in the EIFFEL TOWER. I looked at the clock. It is almost near 7:40. I ran as fast as I could. I saw many people near the Eiffel Tower. I can't get closer!Man!

I pushed the people (almost women and girls-Big Bang power) and went to the the leg of the Eiffel Tower. There was the guide and a woman in front of different legs of the Eiffel Tower. The guide was bringing a travel bag I saw with the stranger. The stranger!! He is the guide who is the stranger! Woman was seemed knotted. A women! It can be the woman who called me! It's right! She is kidnapped!

<Kidnapped>


 The women was knotted by someone so she can't move. Also, she was hidden really secretly so people can't find her. And the Big Bang was doing their rehearsal so people couldn't listen no matter how hard she yelled. I looked at my watch. 7:57. Okay. If I run there it will be 8. And Eiffel Tower will be in a terror! Man! Run Gamine! Run!! I ran to the woman. At 7:58, she saw I was coming and she yelled,
"Bring that guy's travel bag and release the bomb! And release my bomb! Mine is slower!"
So I changed direction to the guide. Then the guide ran with the travel bag. What? What are you doing now? 
"Hey, come back right now!!!!!"
I yelled. Then the guide answered,
"I'm team HACK's boss, Dalos! You can't protect the Eiffel Tower!"
"Oh just shut up, and give your bomb!!!!!!"

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